Joe himself seems like a really enegetic person considering he is 55 years old. i thnk for him to express himself in that manner as a 55 year old is slightly shocking but at the same time i feel as its a good thing because he can get the shoppers attention. He wouldn’t sound like a monotone old man over the PA system like youn would probrably find at any other retail or food store. he is bringing a different type of “flavor to the table that people aren’t used to.
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Chris,
I’m glad you posted your reading response on time, but I do expect more from these. They should be about 250 words (minimum) and need to include your observations and questions. What did you notice? How did this piece contribute to your ongoing study of writing? Be sure to always include a direct quote from the text–a quote that you think is important or representative of a point you’re making.
Megan